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Thursday, December 12, 2013

Essay 2-03b: Learning Computers

Computer is very useful. It is used various. Computer was use Blog, software, document, tools. It is very helpful. Student learns it in any classes.

Writing class, Computer was learn how to post blog and write English. Blog was post book review, movie review, daily, typing and essay. Student can practice typing. They can learn how to write movie review, essay, daily and book review. It is difficult. But It is very helpful. And they learn how to post blog. Student should post 15000 words in blog. It is hard. They learn English too by computer.

Computer was use tool too. There is word, excel and power point on computer. KGU student learn excel in data information processing class. Excel is difficult the most in tools. Student usually study word and power point in junior high school. They don’t excel much. So they learn it first in university. It is helpful in future. Also, computer has gmail, presentation, document and spreadsheet on google. They similar word, power point and excel. Student use it in speaking class and reading class. They used to use it in classes.

Student studies English central by speaking class. English central can speak and view movie English. It is very difficult. Student can study pronunciation. And They study power words in reading class. They take to practice it long time. They can remember many words by it. They use RNN News in reading class too. It can know to translate current English and Japanese.

Computer was learn internet. Internet can be various. People can watch TV, buy goods, make a reservation airplane or a live concert or theater. There are goods various. For example there are sweet, drink, book, magazine, clothes and so on. People learn them. It is easy. So people learn easy. And Computer learned search on Internet. It is necessary thing. KGU student can use to examine ignorance. Student can refer it when they write report. They studied by Youtube on Internet. Youtube is movie site. Internet has many movie site. Youtube is the most famous and popular site. They can view world song and English story and so on. Youtube has movie ranking. It is to use easy.

And computer has many softwares. For example they has Paint, Photoshop, Media player and so on. Painter is software for drowing picture. Photo shop is software for editing picture. Media player is software for watching movie. Also computer was use KGU library homepage on Internet. Computer can was detailed information on KGU library. KGU library has convenient a database. Datebase has news site, CiNii Articles, OECD Library. They only include something using on the campus in KGU. It can studied them in librarian class.

Computer was study how to listen song on computer. Student can listen Walkman by computer. It is interesting and relaxing it. Also computer is made a New Year's card every year. They can make easy it. Student are going to enjoy to make it.

Computer was use with USB, printer and walkman. Student learns how to use them. Printer and walkman was use with software. Also Printer was use in KGU campus. Student should login when they use it. USB was record data on computer. It is necessary. Student bought in data information processing class.

 Student can learn blog, google, search, library homepage, software, USB, Walkman, printer and tool by computer. It is very convenience. Almost student likes them. They use many thing on computer in KGU. It is useful in future. Student studied computer in many classes. Computer develops gradually every day. So Student should more study computer. Student is going to continue learn.
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Friday, November 15, 2013

Essay 2-02c: Introduction to My House

The house is my favorite place.There is vacancy, garden, living room, bath room and Japanese-style room in the house.you can was relax there. For example, you can study, sleep, cooking,draw picture.

First, vacancy is only western room in the house. There is the most the inner part in the house.There is the piano. The piano sometimes was playing. The memories learn how to play the piano bring 6 years from one grade to eight grade. You can always practice piano. Also you can read book and comic in vacancy. The book and the comic is fun.you can read its. You can playing the game in vacancy too. There is "animal wood", "farm story", "Mario" here.

Second, there is flower and cat in garden. There is 9 cats. They is all cute. But they cost food. They are kind of mix. There is a cat in the house. But they many increase. You will enjoy to play and feed cats. There is flower in garden. The flower is rose, hydrangea, violet, pansy, lily etc. The rose the most in the garden flowers. It is plant mother. Mother likes flower. So she plant many flower. It is beautiful. It is beautiful the most in spring

Third, you cook and eat dish in Kitchen. kitchen is the next room bath room. There is table and sink and stove. Kitchen, you can cook curry, miso soup, sukiyaki, hamburger stake etc. Grandmother is good at cook dish. She is often cooking Japanese food. It is delicious.You can enjoy to cook .You will enjoy to try new dish. Also You can cook sweet. For example dumpling, pancake and cookie. kitchen was made often cook many dish. Family eat dish in kitten. they eat they cook newly made dish.

Next, Bath room is relax place.Bath room is the next room kitchen. It is health and worming body. Bath room can listen music.

Then, there is Japanese-style room. It is in next room living room  and Japanese-style room is the best near entrance.you can sleep, study and draw picture here. That is comfortable there. you can study homework and qualification here. There is comfortable studying here. Also you can draw picture there.

And, living room can was watch TV and talk with family.you can often watch drama and news on TV. Living room is in next room Japanese-style room. There is a kotatsu, which is a Japanese foot warmer in winter here. You will often sleep here.

More next, Japanese-style room the best in the house. because it is the most comfortable. Garden the second best in the house too. But There is wasp in garden. They is often make nest here.

Finally, the house is relax place the house is wonderful and comfortable. but there is not use room. because it is many objects here. So object should lost. And It should use anything

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Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Essay 2-02b My favorite place

I will write my about house. My favorite place is my house. I write vacancy, garden, living room, bath room and Japanese-style room. I very like my house. Because It is relax for me. And I can free there. For example I can study, sleep, cooking,draw picture.

First, Vacancy is only western room in my house. There is the piano. I sometimes play the piano. I learn how to play the piano bring 6 years from one grade to eight grade. I’m not good at playing the piano. But I like to playing the piano. Also I read book and comic in vacancy. I like to read book and comic. The book and the comic is fun for me. I like to playing the game in vacancy. I usually play “animal wood”, “farm story”, “Mario”. I like they.

Second, Garden  is flower and cat. I have 9 cats. They is all cute. But they cost food. They are kind of mix. There is a cat in my house. But they many increase. I enjoy to play and feed cats. There is flower in garden. The flower is rose, hydrangea, violet, pansy, lily etc. I like rose the most in my garden flowers. It is plant my mother. My mother likes flower. So she plant many flower. It is beautiful. It is beautiful the most in spring. 

Third, I cook and eat dish in Kitchen. Kitchen, I cook curry, miso supe, sukiyaki, hamburger stake etc with my grandmother. My grandmother is good at cook dish. She is often cooking Japanese food. It is delicious.I'm not good at cook.But I like to cook resent. I enjoy to try new dish. Also I cook sweet. For example I cook dumpling, pancake and cookie. I often cook easy dish. I eat dish in kitten. I eat I cook newly made dish. Also I like to tasting sampling.

Next, Bath room is relax for me. I like here too. It is health and worming my body. I sometimes listening in bath room. I'm more relax too.

Then,  I sleep, study and draw picture in Japanese-style room. I often sleep here.Also I just lie around. That is comfortablethere. I study homework and qualification here. That is good studying for me. Also I draw picture there. My hobby is drawing picture. I like to draw pencil and paint picture. I draw many picture there.

And, I watch TV and talk with my family in living room. I live in dormitory now. So I rare it. I often watch drama and news on TV. My family and I often watch TV. There is  kotatsua Japanese foot warmein winter here. I often sleep here. I relax with my family in living room. My family often talk university,shat and food etc.

More next,I like the best Japanese-style room in my house. I like Garden the same in my house too. But There is wasp in garden. They is often make nest here. So I like the most  Japanese-style room in my house.

Finery, I wrote about my house. I think to like my house again. I was relax in my house. I very like all vacancy, garden, living room, bath room and Japanese-style room in my house. But I want to new my room. There is my room. But there is many objects here. I don’t like there. I can fun my house. I think go back to my home town again.
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Friday, May 31, 2013

Essay 1-02b University Life


Students in my class entered KGU last year. They could make many friends soon after they came to KGU. They usually eat lunch with their friend of university in bakery or a lecture room or a students’ dining hall or a restaurant. I recommend a students’ dining hall. Because It is very delicious. They like the best time for lunch. If you live in alone, you can buy some foods and lunch at university. If you live in dormitory, you can cook lunch with your friend. Before you enter dormitory, you can choose cooperation room or alone room. And you can choose cook or was cook by them in dining room in dormitory. Students talk with their friend about university at after school. They really pleasant to has a chat with them. They often went shopping and Karaoke with their friend. They enjoy it. They think that they were good to have them. Also they can study English with their friend.

They can study in library or bakery or a lecture room or a students’ dining hall or a restaurant. They can teach to study English each other. They always study English. But it is difficult for them. When you became second year, you will busy because you will have report and homework. Christianity introduction class is kind. Student will have a report class. The difficult homework is speaking class and writing class. Japanese history introduction is easy test. The classes are so fun!!!

There are the German language and the French language and Spanish. Students can study foreign language. Other there are The Russians language and the Chinese language and the Korean language. Students can take a favorite language and subjects at university. So, they can skill up the favorite subject. And, teachers of KGU are so kind. Students can be friendly with many teachers. If they can’t understand, teachers will teach them well. They can study comfortably.

Students can take a qualification. Many students will take TOEIC and TOEFL. The score of this examination is important. Students can other qualifications at KGU. Also, there is a national Qualification in them. So students should take some qualification. If you take a qualification, you should go library. You can rent some books about the qualification. Students often use there. And they can take the car license. If you take it, you go to somewhere with your friends.

Many students belong to club activities. There is various clubs at KGU. Students can choose their favorite club, they can enter it. They can make more friends. They can share their hobbies. Students can enjoy it. When they go home after school, they do their homework. students are busy. But, students can go shopping with their friends.


Also student go for a part time job after school. They are doing many places. For example, convenience stores, restaurant, and clothes shop. Students hold out a part time job to earn money.
  
You can go abroad when university student. First, you go abroad to study. You can study English in America or the UK or New Zealand or Canada or Australia. Second,you travel private. You may graduation trip or sightseeing. You will enjoy it.

Student go bowling or talk or go a ravine with friend in holiday. Student can enjoy in holiday.

The KGU school building is new and beautiful. There is fifteen building. The eleventh building is the seventh floor the most high. If you be in trouble, you will the educational affairs department in the eleventh building. Also you can use computer in the fourteenth building or a library when you use to study computer. If you enter circle, you would often go in the eighth building. And you may make use of a convenience store in a students’ hall. I think you pass a road lined with trees. It is beautiful colored leaves at fall. Student can borrow book or watch DVD.And Student use study room in the first floor and the second  floor.
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Wednesday, April 17, 2013

My start-up Labels

books, brainstorms, drafts, essay prep., essays, fiction, free-writing, graphics, links, media, mind-maps, movies, non-fiction, outlines, quickposts, references, reviews, revisions, typing, websites

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Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Essay 1-01a:Dear Host Family

Hello, Nice to me you. My name is Kaya. I am Japanese woman. I am nineteen years old. My birthday is January. I graduated from high school. and I am now KGU university student. I belong to art club at junior high school. I didn’t belong to club high school. I study English at university. But I am not good at English. I think it is difficult. 
My hobby is playing the piano, drawing picture and reading books. Do you have a hobby? I like to see soccer game. I like to watch harry potter. I like cats .because It is very cute. What animal do you like? I like sushi and sweets. What food do you like? I don’t have any allergies. Do you have any?

 I want to study English there. If I make a mistake in English grammar, Please be free to correct my English. I also want to know your country and culture. If I show me wrong manners, Please be free to correct me. I will bring some Japanese things for you. What do you want? But it want be expensive. 

My Family is mother and grandfather. My mother is spirited. She is a nurse.My grandmother is gentle. I am an only child. I want to know your family. I am nervous to stay at your home. But I will enjoy my stay there. 

I can cook Japanese food a little. I want to treat you to a meal. I am happy to suit your plate. Do you like cooking? I think it is interesting. How do your area’s climate? Cold? Hot? My area is Celsius 0~10 today. It is cold. 

I want to go to US and UK. I plan sightseeing Kyoto. Because I like Kyoto. I want to be a public employee. 

I will stay to study English. I tank they from the bottom for they kindness. I am looking forward to seeing you.
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